His mouth was neither sad nor happy but resigned; like a true soldier he hid his emotions.
Language feature: Simile
Effect: Shows us more of his emotions and that he hates showing them
War medals were regimented across his chest, like soldiers on parade
Language feature: Simile
Effect: shows there are alot of war medals
His mouth was neither sad nor happy but resigned
Language feature: Emotive language
Effect: shows how he is feeling
The red rose-coloured jacket was heavy and weighed his frail body down.
Language Feature: Pronoun
Describes what it looks like.
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